FINNEGANS WAKE NOTEBOOKS

Sheets VI, typescript of additions to Book III transitions: Paris

Facsimile edition: James Joyce Archive vol. 61, ed. Danis Rose.
Manuscript: British Library 47486a 500-509, 1936 Notebook details
Finnegans Wake Notebooks and Notesheets

FW Sheet 6 p. 1


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-500 JJA 61:627

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(a)

89 after “gigscrew” in the text insert:  of subscribers color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):064(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(b)

137 after “tummlipplads” insert:  and forain dances color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):063(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(c)

145 after “meeting” insert:  , vehmen's vengeance vective volleying, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):062(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(d)

71 after “city” |||ain the text insert||a|: whom 'tis better ne'er to name, my said brother, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):060(c), N47 (VI.B.40):060(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(e)

71 after “lungs” in the pink note No 3. insert:  my sad late brother color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):060(e), N47 (VI.B.40):062(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(f)

72 after But who in the text insert:  for the brilliance of brothers color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):064(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(g)

94 after “Sackerson” in the text insert:  Hookup! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):061(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(h)

78 after the words “or what” in the text insert:  static color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):059(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(i)

34 after pellmale in the text insert:  , their jeune premier, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):059(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(j)

47 after “altogether” in the text insert:  , my sumptuous Sheila! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):058(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(k)

57 after “monoark. And” (yellow notes and text) insert:  , remember this a chorines, color t.b.a.

Note: Chorine (slang): chorus girl. Irish a cháirde: friends [vocative case]. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):058(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(l)

57 second line from top instead of “college” with: |||abeurlatz shool] beurlads scoel||a| color t.b.a.

Note: Berlitz schools in Trieste and Pola, where Joyce was employed as a teacher. Irish Beurla: English. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):057(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(m)

4 third line from top instead of “forsaken” insert: forsoaken color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):056(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 1(n)

4 after “goodcheap” insert:  , were it thermidor oogst or floreal may while the whistling prairial whistling roysters play, color t.b.a.

  • FW 406.36f
  • 2010
  • 1939
  • MS missing
  • JJA not reproduced Usage
  • Draft: III§1A.12+'' . Thermidor: midsummer month, Floreal, midspring month [French Revolutionary Calendar]. Dutch Oogst: August, harvest. Whistling oysters.
Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):056(b)

FW Sheet 6 p. 2


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-501 JJA 61:628

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(a)

57 after B.A.A. in the text insert:  who gets twickly fullgets twice as allemandern huskers parle trois oreilles color t.b.a.

Note: French Allemagne. In text with Danish mand man, and huske: remember. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):056(e), N47 (VI.B.40):056(c), N47 (VI.B.40):056(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(b)

65 after “marches” in the text insert::  and they straining at the leash color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):055(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(c)

49 after “passed” in the text insert::  after surceases all serene color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):055(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(d)

after “duel with herself” insert::  Twinstreams color t.b.a.

Note: Placement of unit incorrect in this note, corrected at next level. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):055(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(e)

87 afterv “tumple” insert::  like greased lightning color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):054(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(f)

80 after “evrything” insert::  to please everybody color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):053(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(g)

68 after “first mover” insert::  that father I ascend from color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):053(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(h)

87 after “of myself” insert::  in reply to salute color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):052(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(i)

57 after “and being” insert::  as homely gauche as [and] on page 57 delete the full stop after the word “swift” in the text! color t.b.a.

Note: Holy Ghost. Gauche. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):052(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(j)

41 after “solitar” insert::  We are all eyes. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):052(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(k)

55 yellow note “i” last line but one delete the word “How” start the word “was” with a capital ~ color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(l)

~ and after “love,” insert::  no bigger than she should be color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):050(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(m)

72 after N.S.W. insert::  his condition color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):049(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(n)

95 after “no less” insert::  the meg of megs color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):049(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(o)

68 after “habit” insert::  from Mezienius and Mezosius color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):048(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 2(p)

8 after “hongue” begin the next paragraph after the dash inserting: And it is the fullsoot of a tarabred. color t.b.a.

Note: Falsehood. Thoroughbred.

FW Sheet 6 p. 3


[Paris, January/February 1936]
BL MS 47486b-502 JJA 61:629

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(a)

131 after “grate” in the text add: Adam's mantel. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):091(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(b)

68 after “clthes” in the text insert;: from patristic motives color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):091(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(c)

90 after loosed in the text insert::  Tolloll, schools color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):132(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(d)

65 after “now,” in the text insert::  if I foreshoreten |||athe bloss on your bleather||a| Encroachment spells erosion. Dunlin and turnstone augur us where, how and when best as to burial of carcass, fuselage of dump and committal of noisance. But color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):132(c), N47 (VI.B.40):132(d), N47 (VI.B.40):133(a), N47 (VI.B.40):079(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(e)

79 after “moisten your lips” in the text insert::  for a lightning strike color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):090(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(f)

59 after “choreographer” in the yellow notes insert::  Piper to prisoned! color t.b.a.

Note: Also written in (scribally) on BL-486b-403 (JJA 61:424, III:2C.13+') Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):090(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(g)

91 after “hair” in the yellow notes insert::  So vickyvicky veritiny! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):090(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(h)

137 after “True!” insert::  Vouchsafe me more soundpicture. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):088(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(i)

65 after “like to” delete “put a question” and replace by: send a cormorant around this blue lagoon. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):088(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(j)

67 after “Kevin” in the text insert::  or (let outers pray) Evan Vaughan of his Posthorn in the High Street, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):087(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(k)

71 begin paragraph with the insertion: Oessoyess! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):092(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(l)

140 after “foreign firm” insert::  , since disseized color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):086(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(m)

151 after “laying” insert::  , crown jewels to a peanut, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):086(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(n)

151 after “choculars” insert; pepped from our Theatre Regal's drolleries puntomine color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):085(b), N47 (VI.B.40):086(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(o)

151 after “churchal” insert: and submarine bar yonder color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):084(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(p)

50 after “gartergazer” insert::  at the summit of hi climax, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):085(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 3(q)

151 after “questions” insert::  vizaviz the secret empire of the snake color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):083(c)

FW Sheet 6 p. 4


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-503 JJA 61:630

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(a)

48 after “praying” insert::  Holy Prohibition and color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):078(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(b)

151 after “stepmarm” insert::  , old noseheavy, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):078(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(c)

66 after enkel insert::  at the navel manuvres color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):078(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(d)

144 after “coynth” insert::  Hatenot havenots. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):077(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(e)

40 after “Jaun,” insert::  kicking the console to his double and color t.b.a.

Note: Console: the desk from which an organ is played, containing keyboards, stop action, etc. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):077(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(f)

78 before “Lay yer lug” insert as beginning of the paragraph: The snare drum!' color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):076(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(g)

84 |||ain||a| Note 8 |||a(pink)||a| before “Dervilish glad” insert::  Crashedafar Corumbas! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):074(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(h)

89 after “supposing” insert::  for an ethical fict color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):073(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(i)

73 after “singing him” insert::  henpecked color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):070(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(j)

74 after “sitting” insert::  him humpbacked color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):070(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(k)

73 after “I see” insert::  Thinking young through the muddleage spread, the moral fat his mental leans on. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):074(e), N47 (VI.B.40):074(f), N47 (VI.B.40):068(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(l)

45 after “higher” insert::  Oil for meed and toil for feed and a walk with the band for Job Loos. color t.b.a.

Note: Song Tea for two and two for tea. Joe Loos: band leader. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):067(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(m)

44 before “stand on” insert::  , bending your steps, pick a trail and color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):067(d), N47 (VI.B.40):066(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(n)

87 after “his holiness” insert::  the whole goat's throat color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):066(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(o)

88 before “I didn't say” insert::  Are you to have all the pleasure quizzing on me? color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):065(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(p)

144 before “my time” insert::  Share the wealth and spoil the weal. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):064(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 4(q)

96 after “Dashe” insert::  or with any of my cousines color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):071(a)

FW Sheet 6 p. 5


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-504 JJA 61:631

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(a)

87 after “about thassballs and” insert::  ejaculating about color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):135(h)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(b)

87 after “certainly think about it. I hope.” insert::  Unless it is actionable. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):136(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(c)

87 after “to think about something” insert::  which I must on no account omit. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):135(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(d)

137 after “pink it this way” insert::  For long has it been effigy of standard royal when broken on roofstaff which to the gunnings shall cast welcome from Courtmilits” Fortess, umptydum dumptydum. |||yBemark you these hangovers, those streamer fields|||y* color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):135(f), N47 (VI.B.40):134(c), N47 (VI.B.40):134(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(e)

137 after “in walk Ney” - vide Note (c) on yellow paper, for page 137 --insert::  I trow it well, and uge by uge. color t.b.a.

Note: Danish uge: week.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(f)

137 after “all their king's men” - vide Note (c) on yellow paper, for page 137 -- insert::  , knechts tramplers and cavalcaders, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):135(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(g)

62 after “their firrum heads” replace full stop by comma and add: the travelling court on its findings circulating that personer in his fallen. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):036(i), N47 (VI.B.40):135(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(h)

63 after “beauty all surrounded” insert::  , the poser, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):037(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(i)

78 after “moving mound or what” insert::  strays color t.b.a.

Note: Mislocated; relocated on next draft level. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):038(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(j)

85 for “perchance wilt thou say” read: perchance wilt thoult say color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):039(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(k)

72 after “austrasia or anywhere” insert::  with my faungest color t.b.a.

Note: Fondest.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(l)

72 in “any lime on the subject” change “subject” to: sopjack color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 5(m)

44 for “Marist Fathers” substitute: Mirist fathers' brothers color t.b.a.

Note: Marist Fathers (religious order), Dublin. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):040(b)

FW Sheet 6 p. 6


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-505 JJA 61:632

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(a)

68 after “by whom I came into being” insert::  in ayr, plage and wa[t]ford color t.b.a.

Note: Cornish ayr: air, sky. French plage: sea. Watford: London suburb.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(b)

|a68 69a| after “The twicer” insert::  trifoaled in Wanstable color t.b.a.

Note: Born in a stable (the Duke of Wellington's dilemma). Trefoil. Three in one.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(c)

83 after “are you” in the pink note No 7 insert::  solarly and salemly color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):042(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(d)

83 after “siriusly” in the pink note No 7 insert::  and selenly color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):042(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(e)

56 after “of poetry” insert::  Told you so. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):043(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(f)

49 after the yellow note “h” finishing with the word “chewing” insert::  Give us another cup of your scald. That was a damn good cup of scald. color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(g)

41 after “Gyess!” insert::  Call'st thou? color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):043(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(h)

41 after “poolp” insert::  Open the door softly, somebody wants you, dear. color t.b.a.

Note: Shaun the Post, in Arrah-na-Poghue, sings ‘Open the door softly, Somebody wants ye, dear’. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):044(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(i)

47 after “near a million” insert::  or so color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):044(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(j)

37 after “Corragio” insert::  with their extrahand Mazzaccio color t.b.a.

Note: Masaccio, the noted painter. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):045(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(k)

71 correct the word “australian” into; ostralian color t.b.a.

Note: Also written in on BL-486b-337 (III:3A.10'+)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(l)

72 after “namesick” in the yellow note “b” insert::  as we sayed it in our Amharican color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):045(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(m)

79 after “loved that man” insert::  who has africot lupps color t.b.a.

Note: African lips. Apricot.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(n)

71 after “Dublire” insert::  , per Neuropaths. color t.b.a.

Note: Europe. Neuron. Psychopath.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(o)

72 after “soberer” insert::  otiumic color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(p)

68 after “to back me” insert::  , then ersed irredent, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):046(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(q)

94 after “the Beads” insert::  of Tipknock Castle color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):046(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 6(r)

|||a72 after “I suppose” insert::  expecting for his clarenx negus||a| color t.b.a.

Note: Draft material. See also N51 (VI.B.44):046(f) Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):136(f)

FW Sheet 6 p. 7


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-506 JJA 61:633

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(a)

88 after “Emania!” in the yellow note “e” insert::  Raffaroo! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):136(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(b)

137 after “pueblos” insert::  restrained by chain of hands color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):045(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(c)

28 after “eggschicker” insert::  with the smell of old woman off him. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):137(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(d)

28 in the insertion (on yellow sheet) after “kicked him” insert::  Negas, negasti — negertop, negertoe, negertoby, negrunter! color t.b.a.

Note: Negus Negesti (king of kings), title of the emperor of Abyssinia. Latin negus, you deny; negasti: you have denied; negarentur: they might be denied. Danish neegertop: Negro head. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):137(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(e)

27 after “we suggested” insert::  with an esiop's foible color t.b.a.

Note: Ethiop. Aesop. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):137(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(f)

83 the words “I think it was” should be replaced by: I've a big suggestion it was color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(g)

83 in the yellow insertion “j” before “The saloon bilkhead” insert in the same paragraph: Bully burley yet hardly hurley. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):158(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(h)

65 change the “burialboat” into: burialbatell, the boat of millions of years. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):140(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(i)

65 after “Danemerk” insert::  Sacked it or ate it? color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):155(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(j)

65 after “Ganghorn” insert::  And meet Nautsen. color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(k)

73 pink note 7 after “sokolist” delete “rams over” and insert: besoops juts kamps or clapperclaws a … color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):039(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(l)

94 after “cookinghagar” insert::  that braised her prayer to him upon the top of the stairs color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):138(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(m)

65 after “What!” insert::  Hennu! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):139(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(n)

66 after fui“story” insert::  which obtains color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):139(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(o)

7 after “from on high” insert::  out of the book of breedings color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):139(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(p)

137 after “in thisway” insert::  at tet-a-tet. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):140(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(q)

137 after “do you leer” insert::  a setting-up? color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):143(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(r)

137 after “I leer” insert::  (O my big, O my bog, O my bagbone!) color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):150(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(s)

7 after “pedestriats” and before the bracket insert::  , my answerers color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):144(f)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(t)

7 yellow note m, replace the entire bracket by: (and it is as veriest throth as the thieves' recension) color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):144(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(u)

66 before “Was this Totem” insert::  A cataleptic mithyphallic! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):151(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(v)

7 first line delete the word “pri;atiaaly” and replace it by: premitially color t.b.a.

Note: Also written in on BL-486b-304 (JJA 61:312)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(w)

137 yellow note “f” after “illuminatured one” insert::  Papyroy of Pepinregn, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):142(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 7(x)

137 yellow note “i” after “ylifter” insert::  umbrilla-parasoul, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):152(d)

FW Sheet 6 p. 8


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-507 JJA 61:634

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(a)

60 after “to come” insert::  The phaynix rose a sun before Erebia sank his smother! Shoot up on that, bright Bennu bird! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):145(a) and N47 (VI.B.40):145(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(b)

7 after “circulating about” insert::  like them nameless souls color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):145(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(c)

85 after “and” before “as far as him was concerned” insert::  , who as a matter of pact, color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(d)

85 after “curse of things” insert::  as complement to compliment color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):153(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(e)

61 after “hillock lay” insert::  heartsoul dormant mid shadowed landshape, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):145(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(f)

7 after “Dublin river” insert::  or the catchalot trouth subsidity color t.b.a.

Note: Catholic Truth Society. Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):148(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(g)

74 instead of “Saturn's ring” put: Satarn's serpent ring color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):152(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(h)

74 after “srusshius” insert::  , the obesendean, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):147(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(i)

74 after “the bars” insert::  Mother of emeralds, ora poor neighbours! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):157(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 8(j)

75 after “to stuff” insert::  if so be you may identify yourself with the him in you color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):157(b)

FW Sheet 6 p. 9


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-508 JJA 61:635

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(a)

49 after “remainder” insert::  To it, to it! Seekit headup! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):143(d), N47 (VI.B.40):144(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(b)

49 after “upmeyant” insert::  by the banks of our chlorified Amneslethea color t.b.a.

Note: By the banks of our glorified Anna Livia.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(c)

49 after “idle be” insert::  You will hardly |||arecognise reconnaitre||a| the old wife in the new bustle and the farmer |||aseller shinner||a| in his latterday paint. It's the fulldress Toussaint's wakeswalks experdition after a bail motion from the chamber of horrus. Saffron buns or sovran bonhams whichever you'r avider to like it and lump it but give it a name. color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):138(b), N47 (VI.B.40):143(c), N47 (VI.B.40):145(c) and N47 (VI.B.40):145(h)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(d)

142 before “Projector” insert::  Prospector color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):146(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(e)

142 before “giant builder” insert::  boomooster color t.b.a.

Note: Big mister. German Baumeister: master builder. [Ibsen title, The Master Builder.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(f)

67 line 7 from below after “your” insert::  due color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):147(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(g)

74 instead of the printed “bul' srusshius” write: liongrass and bul' srusshius color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):147(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(h)

72 after “Nolan” insert::  The Workings, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):148(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(i)

142 insert 1 on pink page after “La Diva” insert::  peg of his claim and pride of her heart, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):148(c)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(j)

74 before “Holy snakes” insert::  Apep and Uachet! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):149(e), N47 (VI.B.40):a01(e)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 9(k)

137 Pink note No 9 after “Poppop array” insert::  For we're all jollygame fellhellows which nobottle can deny! color t.b.a.

Note: For he's a jolly good fellow which nobody can deny! Phrase, Hail fellow well met.

FW Sheet 6 p. 10


[Paris, early 1936, TS only: original missing]
BL MS 47486b-509 JJA 61:636

 
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(a)

77 after “communicating” insert::  in the deification of his members color t.b.a.

Note: See also N38 (VI.B.32):170(c). Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):149(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(b)

90 after “Spawning” insert::  ova and fry color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):149(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(c)

90 instead of “over” whixh delete insert: amanygoround color t.b.a.

Note: A merry-go-round.
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(d)

70 after “T square” insert::  of burial jade color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):160(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(e)

70 after “Now I” insert::  the lord of |aTattoo Tuttooa| color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):a01(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(f)

70 after “horizont the ame” insert::  , this serpe with ramshead, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):a01(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(g)

70 after sign it sternly” insert::  , an adze to girdle, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):a01(g)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(h)

70 after “Elements.” insert::  Tootoo moohootch! color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):a01(d)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(i)

137 after “tomorrow in” delete “tet's other's” and insert: toth's tother's color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N33 (VI.B.4):202(a)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(j)

137 after “never here” insert::  that one color t.b.a.

FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(k)

77 after “fluorescent” insert::  of his swathings color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):161(g)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(l)

70 after “Now” 12th line from bottom insert::  the oneir urge impelling it iterimpellant, color t.b.a.

Original notebook: N47 (VI.B.40):161(b)
FW Sheet 6 : p. 10(m)

49 after “irelands” insert::  And there's food for refection when the whole flocks at home. color t.b.a.